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Euphemism alert: “active waist”
Euphemism alert: “active waist”

It’s a design feature necessitated by the presence of a distinctly inactive waist.

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How not to writeClare LynchSeptember 13, 2012euphemism Comments
Euphemism alert: “custody suite”
Euphemism alert: “custody suite”

One distinct downside of the privatisation of public services is the ever-creeping presence of marketese.

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How not to writeClare LynchAugust 30, 2012euphemism Comment
Beware this word "unprecedented"
Beware this word "unprecedented"

The campaign was, it says, conducted with "unprecedented care and precision".

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How not to writeClare LynchMay 14, 2012words Comments
Clinton Cards: proof that bad writing is a sign of a bad business?
Clinton Cards: proof that bad writing is a sign of a bad business?

We believe there’s a big link between how you write and how likely you are to succeed in business.

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How not to writeClare LynchMay 10, 2012investor relations Comments
Five Churchillian tips to help you write like a leader
Five Churchillian tips to help you write like a leader

To write like a leader break out of the corporate language rut and ditch dead verbs.

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How to writeClare LynchMay 8, 2012Churchill, leadership Comments
A cliché as individual as you are
A cliché as individual as you are

Think twice before you choose to pin this tired old strap line to your product.

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How not to writeClare LynchApril 30, 2012clichés, straplines Comments
Five essential questions to ask before you even start writing
Five essential questions to ask before you even start writing

"That writer does the most who gives his reader the most knowledge, and takes from him the least time"

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How to writeClare LynchApril 24, 2012writing, copywriting Comments
25 quick business writing tips (and a link to 100 more)
25 quick business writing tips (and a link to 100 more)

For writing that’s easy to read, make friends with the full stop.

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How to writeClare LynchApril 10, 2012Business writing tips Comments
Three quick tips for writing a totally pointless press release
Three quick tips for writing a totally pointless press release

We’ve been a bit upbeat on this blog lately. . .

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How not to writeClare LynchMarch 5, 2012press releases Comments
The punctuation mistake you never knew you were making
The punctuation mistake you never knew you were making

Here’s a grammar rule that'll come as a big surprise to many of you.

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Grammar and punctuationClare LynchFebruary 29, 2012punctuation Comments
Business writers: show, don't tell
Business writers: show, don't tell

If you’ve ever taken a creative writing class, you’ll be familiar with the phrase “show, don’t tell”.

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How to write, How not to writeClare LynchFebruary 22, 2012storytelling Comments
Fight on the beaches!
Fight on the beaches!

We love this anecdote from The Wicked Wit of Winston Churchill, compiled by Dominique Enright.

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How to writeClare LynchFebruary 13, 2012anecdote, Churchill, business writing, Business writing tips Comments
Write with a knife for more powerful prose
Write with a knife for more powerful prose

Finally happy with that document you’ve been working on all morning? Great. Now go back and cut 20%.

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How to writeClare LynchJanuary 16, 2012prose, writing Comments
How to master the peculiarly English art of the polite command
How to master the peculiarly English art of the polite command

There are times when business writing demands more words, rather than fewer

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How to write, EditorClare LynchNovember 1, 2011English as a second language, polite, english Comments
Another 25 quick business writing tips
Another 25 quick business writing tips

Use “people”, not “persons” (unless you really do want to sound like you’re arresting said “persons”).

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How to writeClare LynchOctober 11, 2011Business writing tips Comments
Writing for the wrong audience
Writing for the wrong audience

And please, who ever found an office ‘environment’ inspiring?

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David PollackSeptember 21, 2011writing Comments
Evasiveness: the number-one corporate value
Evasiveness: the number-one corporate value

Have you noticed how so much business English is written in a bizarrely evasive style?

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How not to writeClare LynchJuly 6, 2011corporate jargon, scenes from corporate life Comments
Communicating bad news - some dos and don'ts
Communicating bad news - some dos and don'ts

How do you communicate bad news?

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How to write, How not to writeClare LynchJuly 4, 2011communication Comments
Story first, strategy second
Story first, strategy second

How do you balance communicating management views while trying to keep employees interested in your staff newsletter?

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How to writeClare LynchJune 30, 2011storytelling Comments
Does your writing pass the "mum" test?
Does your writing pass the "mum" test?

So in our third post on readability, we thought we'd actually put some business writing to the "mum" test.

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How to writeClare LynchJune 28, 2011readability Comments
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