How to edit your writing

I always tell my students that editing is where the magic happens. In my latest video, I put that theory into practice by showing you my editing process in action.

Here, you can watch me edit as I take a real-life email I received and turn it from dull and confusing into something much more effective. 

Let me know in the comments what you think of the video! And if you have any examples of text you’d like to see me edit, do let me know!